Excellence is respected—even expected for publication, but bloopers are not welcome.  I have unfortunately offered my fair share of bloopers during the submission process.  Let’s look over some ways to add professionalism to our writings and increase their acceptance and circulation.
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Through the course of this past year we have visited many topics: goal setting, library resources, finding your best idea, the value of conferences, how to write endings, write your desired message and more. Applying these guidelines, tools, and skills will aide us significantly in our efforts to earn a living as a writer or publicly minister with our particular gift of words.

Once you chose your topic, target audience, and compete the project, I advise every writer to slow down. Let your piece rest—rather like one allows their bread dough to rise. So often eagerness to complete our projects quickly causes us to pass over mistakes or areas that lack quality. I personally have written prose or lessons that made perfect sense as I wrote. When I’ve read those pages at a later date, I wondered what I meant by this statement or that one. Ouch!

I’ve seen many encouragements for authors to finish their novel and leave it alone for a couple of weeks before diving in for the big edit. That allows your inner “eagle eye” to switch on, preventing boundless bloopers from directing your work to the rejection pile. I’ve been amazed at how I’ve ignored or not applied excellent advice from well-published authors. Of course, I go around the mountain a few times and find myself right where I started. Finally, I take the advice and use it while wondering what took me so long! (Be careful here, there are different genres and types of writing. Bad advice is out there—unintentional misdirection is costly to your spirit and submissions as well as your time. Be discerning and take time to look at writings that are similar to yours, but are published in order to get a balanced view of expectations for your market.)

Show that you are able to meet deadlines, while gaining experience by doing smaller articles, devotions or projects. This provides credibility and gives you a win, win, win for all the benefits you can enjoy such as: honing your skills, making connections, ministering with your message and possibly gaining some income!

Let’s take a look at the Christian Writers Market and the Writers Market publishing helps.
Now let’s try an internet website I was told about that could be quite helpful to us all. Special thanks to Miss Lee, the teacher I work with. She shared these useful websites for our group!

http://www.hemingwayapp.com/

• This website provides the grade level of your work. The color codes point to the weak spots you may choose to edit. You don’t have to make the changes it suggests, but this will add new eyes on your words that will make you aware of what an editor may not wish to wade through.

https://www.paperrater.com/

• Free online grammar, plagiarism and spelling checking site.

Consider what you have learned as you edit what your muse spilled on the pages of your manuscript or writings. Remember:

• Slow down
• Don’t ignore advice from professionals
• Submit the small stuff that is related to your writing goals

 

​PENS OF PRAISE CHRISTIAN WRITERS GROUP
March 19, 2019
Tuesday 6:30 p.m. – 8:30 p.m.

Faith Church
2201  42nd Street, Manitowoc, WI  54220
   Faith Church is located next to Festival Foods
   Not far from the Manitowoc exit off Interstate 43
 
EAGLE EYE OR BOUNDLESS BLOOPERS is our lesson this month.  Susan Marlene will direct this class concerning tools and skills to make professional writings for publication. Resource books on this important topic will be examined. Bring paper and pen or your computer for the writing exercises.

An inspired reader given excellent take-away = return readers!
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PROMPT: Use your favorite genre to write a one-page piece on spills or spillage!
Let Susan Marlene know if you will attend so that we can provide a printed lesson for you and also save a seat for you!
We are a safe place to share.
 
Bring your favorite coffee or tea with you! J
 
As always, if you have any questions or concerns don’t hesitate to contact Becky McLafferty @ rebeccamclafferty@gmail.com or
Susan Marlene@ susanmarlenewrites@gmail.com
 

UPPING YOUR VERBIAGE & WRESTLING A THESAURUS by Susan L. Fink 
Thank you Susan for your timely lesson and skill at leading this very useful lesson! My mind is still running over your assignments and words of wisdom! 
Anyone can visit Susan L. Fink at:  https://susanlfink.blogspot.com/
                                                                                   
WELCOME TO PENS OF PRAISE CHRISTIAN WRITERS GROUP
Tuesday, February 19, 2019
 
Introductions for new guests.
Pass around sign in sheet.
 
PENS OF PRAISE STATEMENT OF BELIEF:
Pens of Praise Christian Writers Group is a fellowship of word-loving communicators who provide encouragement, education, and listening ears to those writing clean and encouraging communication. We support the development of skill, attention to detail, and professionalism necessary to obtain personal and public publication. We are a group not limited by age, so even very young writers are welcome. We support Christian values and therefore do not share sex or overtly violent scenes, which would not be in keeping with Christian values concerning entertainment or enlightenment.

WRITER’S PRAYER
(by Rebecca McLafferty)
 
Dearest Father God,
 
I come before you this day with thanksgiving, knowing that you are here with me.
I pray that you will use my writing to glorify you. May my words, both spoken and written, honor you. When I am unsure of what to write, encourage me, Lord. May your love, peace, and hope shine through my writing to touch lives—even the lives of those who don’t know you. In the name of Jesus, I pray. Amen
 
Devotion—by Naomi Raddatz
 
GRAMMAR TIDBIT:
HYPHEN VS. DASH  hyphen (-), en dash (–), and em dash (—)
By Rebecca McLafferty
 
Let the teaching begin!   
UPPING YOUR VERBIAGE & WRESTLING A THESAURUS
Susan Fink will direct our class this blustery month of February. Susan will provide information about interactive writing with information about excellent resource books on this important topic.

Remember, leaving your reader inspired with an excellent take-away is like an open invitation for your reader to return! We will also llow 5-minute readings from our writers as time allows at the end of the teaching.

PROMPT:  Use your favorite “Big Word” and write what you please! ANNOUNCEMENTS:

Let’s Keep In Touch: If you have a WEB page, blog, social media address, or other online personal information to share with Pens writers, please send to susanmarlenewrites@gmail.com so that contact information can be added to the announcement and handouts.
Becky McLafferty writes on Thursdays for “Fill My Cup, Lord” (A FB page.)
Becky McLafferty https://www.beckymclafferty.com/
Susan Marlene  www.susanmarlene.com; 
Susan Fink https://www.facebook.com/susan.l.fink     https://susanlfink.blogspot.com/
Kate Jungwirth https://www.facebook.com/kate.jungwirth.7
Debby Erdmann https://www.facebook.com/debby.erdmann?fref=pb&hc_location=friends_tab
You are invited to visit and make a comment! That would be especially nice! 😊 

1. Mary Janes Farm magazine is looking for articles. Thank you, Kathy Leist!!!
2. I advertised Pens on  TheFamily.net WEMI  FM
3. https://www.hachettebookgroup.com/recommended-reads/books-for-writers/ Thank you, Sue Fink
4. Write To Publish Conference   http://www.writetopublish.com/
5. Christian Devotions is looking for devotions. This is not a paid site, but one to give to the Lord and share your message with others!   www.christiandevotions.us 
6. The Novice, Silver Lake College’s Symposium on April 25th

 

​What do you like to find on-line?

• When people have a question, many will search the world wide web for their answers. Many will look for an author’s website or blog before purchasing a book. Maybe a topic of interest is what you write about. When we use social media responsibly, we assist people we more-likely-than-not will never meet this side of heaven to find information or encouragement or guidance to make life easier or more meaningful. When considering what you like to find on-line you may discover what you want to provide for others.

What about time?

• Pacing ourselves and managing time spent on social media is vital. Otherwise social media will eat up quality writing time. Using social media to minister to others is a great target to aim for. I find it helps to look at social media outlets as opportunities to encourage and share what knowledge and wisdom God has blessed me with.
• I’ve strengthened my presence on FaceBook and my website. I still need to build other social media and increase my online presence. How? Restricting my time by allowing myself only 7-10 minutes per additional media locations. Even twice a week would bring more exposure for my message. That way I can post and share other people’s posts without it eating up my whole day and my writing time.
• Let’s talk over ideas on using the unique time slots we have that can fit with all of our different situations and demanding schedules. Write down any fresh ideas.

What’s the Plan?

• I’ve heard and read the suggestion of starting one or two social media connections. Then once those are established, branching out as time allows. If you start too many at one time then your effectiveness is diluted concerning reaching people and sharing the message of your heart.
• How many here wish to make a decision for starting social media or branching out with a pace that will not undermine writing time or other social media already started?

Content?

• Knowing ‘your message focus’ will help immensely. If you talk about everything from dog food to WW II ships to future spaceship launch possibilities, your readers will not connect with you. Focus on offering help or information to readers who like what you like. Examples: cooking; healing from a damaged past; exercise for cardio; excellent vacation spots and how to afford them—you catch my drift, right? My inkyquillbysuzie.blogspot.com is just like that. I was all over the place with subjects. Now on my website www.susanmarlene.com I offer different pages such as: Book Review & Author Interview; Devotions; and Writers & Pens along with the home page and my information page. This allows potential readers to see what I offer for their particular interest. If the last thing they need to read is about writer and Pens information they can just pick book reviews or devotions. They are in and out without having to scan through a lot of posts that they would not be interested in. And which they wouldn’t take the time to sift through.
• Do you want to jot down some ideas for your own blog or website now? Share if you dare!

Who Will Benefit?

• Write to lend a hand to others. Build readers up or provide info that will bring increase

and strength to them. Your focus may be prayer, healthy family living, humor, or gardening. All of those benefit readers. Make sure your information counts. Is what you write important enough that you would carve out time from your busy schedule to stop and read it—if someone else wrote it?

• Write a description of the people you write to. Even put a face on them like Aunt Sally or Uncle Ben so that you can truly focus on those you write for.  😊

Precautions to take:

• As with conferences and businesses or school functions, behave wisely with how much information you share about your home and family. We live in a time when we need to be wise as serpents and harmless as a dove. There are many innocent inquiries about you and yours, but there may be those with less honorable reasons for contacting you. Stay away from any appearance of evil. The Lord’s scripture from the Bible is for our protection and for your reputation as well as Christians in general.  What is that saying an ounce of precaution is worth a pound of cure. Well, something like that anyway! Be very cautious and discerning about meeting people you don’t know at a physical location. Listen to that nagging caution when you get a ‘feeling’ that you shouldn’t go here or there or provide personal information.

Getting help to start…

• Sometimes, you just may not know where to begin. Asking for help from a high school or college student or relatives or friends can be a great place to start. If you take good notes on how to change your passwords after someone helps you set-up your social media, you will maintain ultimate control and personal information privacy.

Do you have a plan for reaching the masses with social media? Which of the following interest you?
Facebook
Twitter
Goodreads
Pinterest
YouTube
Blog or Website

PENS OF PRAISE CHRISTIAN WRITERS GROUP
January 15, 2019
Tuesday 6:30 p.m. – 8:30 p.m.

Faith Church
2201  42nd Street, Manitowoc, WI  54220
   Faith Church is located next to Festival Foods
   Not far from the Manitowoc exit off Interstate 43
 
Brick by Brick – Building Social Media is our lesson this month.  Susan Marlene will direct this class of social media tips. How to start and grow in your social media reach. Susan will provide information about some popular how-to books on this important topic. Also, reading-share-time allotted for those who attend!

Pens Assignment: For Fiction and non-fiction writers wishing to participate with reading their work: Edit your pages and share a scene or selection infused with purpose- who, what, where, when, and or why.

Remember, leaving your reader inspired with excellent take-away is like an open invitation for your reader to return!

PROMPT: Use at least three of these words to create your prompt—nullify; annihilate; praiseworthy; promise; pledge; sympathy; future; imminent. Or write to this: My word for 2019.

Let Susan Marlene know if you will attend so that we can provide a printed lesson for you and also save a seat for you! 

We are a safe place to share.
 
Bring your favorite coffee or tea with you! 
 
As always, if you have any questions or concerns don’t hesitate to contact Becky McLafferty @ rebeccamclafferty@gmail.com or
Susan Marlene@ susanmarlenewrites@gmail.com
 

The Chicken Buzzer Meeting of Readings & Insights by Susan Marlene

I place the chicken timer on the table—it’s time to share a read and then explore some information by those teachers of ‘brain science’ on how to write page turners! My thoughts in blue type.

READY SET—WHO WILL BE FIRST TO READ?  (Chicken set for 5 minutes!)

Wired For Story by Lisa Cron: …story told us what to hang on to. Story is what enabled us to imagine….1 When we turn pages with enthusiasm it is possible to not realize why. Revisit favorite authors and keep a notebook where you can write down the emotionally driven thoughts or concepts that stir you and pull you into story. This is good for fiction and non-fiction. Read page 4 third paragraph in Lisa Cron’s book. We want the real life feel to our stories, but without the mundane activities that are so common place and unimportant to the story purpose that they would steal our plot and character—interaction word count.
 
Write three elements of story that cause you to NOT want to leave a story?
What are three elements that cause you to WANT to leave the story?
 
READY SET—WHO WILL BE FIRST TO READ?  (Chicken set for 5 minutes!)

The FIRST 50 PAGES by Jeff Gerke shares wonderful insights on starting a novel with all the right elements that agents, editors, and readers need to be engaged in your story. Gerke states, “In good dialogue, dialogue with subtext, the characters aren’t responding to what the other person says, but to what they think the other person means.”2  In non-fiction, I know I’ve scanned the contents to see if I can relate to what the chapters offer. You must immediately grab the attention and need that your particular reader has. Offer something unique and worthwhile.

Now or at home -write how you could add those three elements to your story.
What three elements do you use that cause you to enjoy your story?
 
READY SET—WHO WILL BE FIRST TO READ?  (Chicken set for 5 minutes!)

Wired For Story  What matters most is that the story “engender a sense of urgency from the first sentence. Everything else—fabulous characters, great dialogue, vivid imagery, luscious language—is gravy.” Again, even for non-fiction the importance of writing to topics that matter and offer help and direction to your reader is vital to a successful book.

READY SET—WHO WILL BE FIRST TO READ?  (Chicken set for 5 minutes!)

Wired For Story—Lisa Cron shares, “the real story is how what happens affects the protagonist, and what she does as a result.” I also heard in a teaching by Randy Ingermanson that the way that reactions are recorded in a scene could muddy the read if the author writes what happens out of order. Your reader may not ‘know’ how it should be written, but they can sense when what is written is out of step with real life happenings. We don’t jump first and then hear glass shattering.  

READY SET—WHO WILL BE FIRST TO READ?  (Chicken set for 5 minutes!)

The FIRST 50 PAGES--Jeff Gerke states, “There is power in your hero’s dreams that may not be immediately evident…is the basis of that high-sounding term, the story question.” The inward motivation and unmet desire at the beginning of the story (realized or unrealized by the heroine/hero) is the fuel that drives the character to achieve that outward goal. The outward goal is very much linked with the inward need, that will be challenged along the story journey. For non-fiction writers, what dream are you targeting that could assist or direct your reader to discover what they need for a better life?

READY SET—WHO WILL BE FIRST TO READ?  (Chicken set for 5 minutes!)

If we have extra time then I can read from sections from these books for those who are interested.

The books I’ve referenced have so much to offer for those seeking to write with excellence and build their skills to communicate story at their very best! If you don’t wish to purchase them you can always request them at your local library.
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1 Wired For Story by Lisa Cron, page 1
 2 The FIRST 50 PAGES by Jeff Gerke page 29
3 Wired For Story by Lisa Cron page 21
4 The FIRST 50 PAGES by Jeff Gerke page104

PENS OF PRAISE CHRISTIAN WRITERS GROUP MEETING

Tuesday, November 20, 2018     6:30 p.m. until 8:30 p.m.

Faith Church
2201  42nd Street, Manitowoc, WI  54220
   Faith Church is located next to Festival Foods
   Not far from the Manitowoc exit off Interstate 43
 
The Chicken Buzzer Meeting of Readings & Insights is our topic this month.  Susan Marlene will direct this class by staggering 5 minutes of reading shares with 5 minute instruction on perfecting the craft by using brain science. We will keep this writer/teaching/writer pattern flowing during our teaching segment.  
Pens Assignment: For Fiction and non-fiction writers wishing to participate in reading their work to the group: Pick up to five pages and edit them before Pens to reading at Pens.  Write a scene or sample with purpose- who, what, where, when, why. If the action or dialogue or information doesn't move the story forward then cut that before the meeting. What does the antagonist want? What gets in the way? What is his/her reaction and feelings and thoughts about what happened? Or for non-fiction—What is your topic, who are you reaching and what is the message focus for tonight?
Susan will provide information from a popular how-to book on writing. Remember, leaving your reader inspired with excellent take-away is like an open invitation for your reader to return!

PROMPT: Truly Thankful or Turkey on the Rise
We are a safe place to share.
 
Bring your favorite coffee or tea with you! 
 
As always, if you have any questions or concerns don’t hesitate to contact Becky McLafferty @ rebeccamclafferty@gmail.com or
Susan Marlene@ susanmarlenewrites@gmail.com
 

Greetings All,

First of all, I want to assign homework for those attending the November Pens meeting.
For those who wish to participate in reading their work to the group:

• Pick up to five pages and edit them for reading at Pens.  (Something new or old that you have written. Wink Debby! ;))
• Write this scene with purpose- who, what, where, when, why.
• If the action or dialogue doesn't move the story forward then cut that.
• What does the antagonist (aka bad or interfering character) or protagonist (hero or heroine) want? What gets in the way? What is his/her reaction and feelings and thoughts about what happened?   

Our Pens Readers have chosen HAZARDOUS DUTY  Squeaky Clean Mysteries, book 1 by award winning author, Christy Barritt,  for our next read! Let me know if you will be among our numbers so that we can inform you on our discussion date!

From Sarah Grosskopf--  in case anyone is interested, the Silver Lake English Community is hosting a writing and art workshop at Woodland Dunes Nature Center this Saturday, November 3rd from 10AM to Noon.  I went last year and it was fun.  Don't know if including the facebook link will work: https://www.facebook.com/events/1029263453921975/


Details:
Join the editors of The Novice for a drop-in poetry and visual art workshop at Woodland Dunes Nature Center any time between 10 a.m. and noon on Saturday, Nov. 3. This free workshop is open to the public and is geared to anyone interested in writing and visual art in the Manitowoc and Two Rivers area. We're looking forward to a creative morning!
Activities/stations will include the following:
--haiku
--found poetry
--nature rubbings
--sensory writing

Thank you, Sarah! Okay that is all for now! 

Blessings and Joy!
Sue

We enjoyed our meeting at Pens of Praise Christian Writers last night, especially because of Kathy Leist’s offering of BARA BRITH (SPECKLED BREAD) the recipe found in our latest Pens Readers novel of choice. The Lacemaker by Laura Frantz was so deeply thrilling to those of us who joined in the read this time around. Kathy’s appreciation of the novel and the recipes tucked inside spilled over into baking this special treat for our Pens meeting “Three Months of Four” by yours truly!  I have posted the teaching on www.susanmarlene.com.

If you only had three or four months to leave a legacy, write a message, a song or book, what would you spend time on? What would be so important to say or be remembered? Let’s ponder and explore time honored questions that could zap our writing ideas to life and stir up goals that would otherwise lie dormant! Ready?
How would you decide what to write? That seems like an excellent place to begin.

• What is important to you? And who would be important to write to?
• Zero in on a message or two and then pick one to be your main focus.
• Will this be a large project or small one? (Example: Articles and short pieces can reach far more readers. Yet, your writings wouldn’t linger with those readers as with a larger project, such as a novel.) Write down how many readers you wish to reach and decide what kind of project you would prefer to accomplish to reach your goal.

What amount of time do you have to work with?

• Realistically choose to adjust or refocus the size of your project, so that it will match the time you have available. Use quality writing to shape your ultimate ideas.
• Respect yourself and allow others to respect your purpose for writing.
• Become aware of what really works for you: calendars, technology, hide in the library study room, or visiting your local coffee shop etc. Writers use all those methods and some.

What are your instincts telling you? Do you know how to listen to yourself or the Lord?

• Is there a nagging, teasing thought that seems to stick around no matter how you have ignored it in the past? You may think that is too BIG or too DIFFICULT for you. I’ve heard it said that challenges and difficulties are really meant to promote you. Will you take the plunge one baby step at a time? What is that inner voice telling you now!

What about starting? Or what about writer’s block?

• Free writing can jump start your brain. Try it!
• Read some poetry or the type of writing you love. (Some are afraid to do that, but still that may work for you. ) Don’t remain blocked because that doesn’t work for others.
• Reread your last chapter to encourage creative juices.
• Doodle

Make a Plan:
What does your ordinary day entail? When are you most focused and have freedom from interruptions? What amount of time can you easily schedule? Are there days when you can bump up writing time to gain more imagination, word count, or edit accomplishments?  Using a calendar, stop watch, or closed door is helpful!
Carrying a notebook and pen with you can be useful if you are in a long line or waiting in a doctor office instead of allowing frustration to rise over wasted time or watching the clock that doesn’t seem to be moving. ;)
Recording your thoughts with your phone or a device is handy also. You can trap your thoughts when you park your car, or wait in a room -when no one is around! 😊
Reward Your Efforts:
Motivation is VIP and if you drive yourself into the ground with work, work, work you will lose steam. Write a list of motivators such as: coffee shop visit with friends, reading a good book with a hot chocolate beside you, an outdoor activity…Chose something you’d really look forward to! Be delighted with life and that delight will reward your pages!
How Do You Estimate ‘How Much Time’ for Researching Your Project?
Research time can be tricky to plan as far as my experience goes. There are bunny-trails waiting to waylay the most interested writers. One piece of info leads to another and another. But you must be firm with yourself and yet have a flexible goal for what info you wish to acquire by the end of the day, week or other. True, some bunny-trails are useful and time-well-spent in the end. Just be cautious and aware. J

• Researching a genre your interested in may take a lot more preparation time than those three or four months. Read how-to books and that genre. Don’t be afraid to underline, take notes, and compare what works and what you admire in that type of writing.

Let’s Take Time to Brainstorm & Plot A Significant Goal For Us All
For our class I made a simple chart for us to organize our thoughts and write down our goals and ideas. It didn't copy well here- be inventive and create your own personal chart for I believe it will solidify your goals and aim your dreams into a doable worthy project!